not finished: grungy elfy philosphy thingy

http://www.xs4all.nl/~hagg/grungy5.jpg

it's not done yet but I kinda like it already

Personally, I really don't think the elvish script works in the context of the rest of the image - it looks rather out of place.

- ion -

ok I really disagree on that but thanks for the comment

http://www.xs4all.nl/~hagg/grungy8.jpg

Some cool effects and filter usage.... but there isn't really anything holding it together for me. I think maybe the faces could be alot less opaque to make them a little more interesting.

I don't find a "focal point".... my eye just wanders. Perhaps a splash of color would help.

Hope that helps.

thanks tornupinside, I think that's what been lacking indeed... hm I prolly going to do something with the face of the girl, maybe replace it with something that has more of the original photo.,....she just HAS to be the focal point :-D

Torn is right about the focal point. When I look at the image it's just sort of a rush of filters, like I can pick through all the effects you used. I'm not saying thats bad, but I think you could benefit greatly from playing with color and blending modes.

Ok I've changed some things and added color....think it's much better now...what do you think?

http://www.xs4all.nl/~hagg/grungy9.jpg

wow... I was thinking it was good without color and stuff but it's really nice now.

Huge improvement...much much better w/ the color