Flyer

Hi,

thats my first post in this Forum!Be pleased with me :p !!

I'm from germany and going to finish my school(that's called Abitur), so that's why my class organizes a party!I've created a flyer for the party!Please write your opinion about it!

Flyer

just try to fill the top right area , totaly empty and the explosion is making it worst ;/ , other wise evertyhing is okay and good :p

I presume that your school is an institution of misogyny, or will they be as impressed as I am?

My eye's keep getting drawn to the bottom right corner area ;)

Got a nice grungy feel to it and the colours suit this style well....I like it :D

Thank you for your comments! They help me a lot!!

The empty space is reserved for prices and the happy-hour conditions so it will be filled :p

@thehermit: I hope i undestood you right! The answer to your question is "sex sells" so thats why we used such a motive(picture)

Boobies on a school flyer! WEEEEE!

it looks nice and i like all the effects you've got going on. the only problem is that there's so much typography going on that i'm not sure where the real info is. but i'm guessing that people the would have a better idea of what it's talking about. you might want to also move the words location and entry up from behind the other text a bit.

Sex may sell but you happen to attend a juvenile facility intended to edify and better yourself. Much as you may like to believe you are not a red braced, pin striped tosser that controls the budgets of Chanel or Loaded (insert what you feel).

You go to school. Don't get above your station. They have rules and equal opps policies, are you going to tell me that these adhere to that?

I'm no moral crucader (perhaps I am in your eyes), but I do believe in a time and a place, obviously this is neither. Nor will I be cowtowed to popular concensus, males and females alike may adore this image, however it does not make it the less base.

Just to add:

If it were for adult purposes for adult consumption and made by an adult I may feel otherwise.

People who are going to visit this party are at least about 19 to 20 years so to my mind this picture is absolutely suitable!!I'm not in the 8th class!