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i just felt like keeping it semple and all so tell me what ya'll think??

and Kranekick you dont have to have other people put your points across...

what's your problem man? am i making other people say that?

"K&M has continued to grow providing you with great art work for your business".
first, this is not great artwork. second, with this quality artwork and attitude u're going to have some pissed off clients one of these days. look, i just set things aside to make a team photoshop splash and pank didn't like it only because of the background texture. i respect his opinion and i will only use it to improve for next time.
guess i shouldn't try to explain this to a clueless 15 year old, and your profile showes that off quite well too.

Hehe, we're having a debate here ;)

Ok first of all it's not the crit. Thats killing me. I posted it to get what ya'll think and when you tell me what you think for example... someone said "ugly." nothing more just ugly well I respect your opinion Thats fine but how does that help me ok it's ugly. Any help on making it not look "ugly" I need help not JUST crit. I’m learning just like everyone else I didn’t need my work to be attacked maybe told whats good and not... then told what I can do to change it or some ideas ya'll have and like you said
"It’s just red" we had to base it on one color ** and I also said nothing at all on it was true words and the computer background are not what I am keeping I just had to turn that in for the first part of the project thats why I didn’t want ya'll to judge anything other then the graphic I highly respect all of your opinions and care a great deal about them but I would like you guys to understand what I’m asking and not to just "vote" good or bad. I need some real feedback I wasn’t trying to start anything with you K it's just I don’t think you understood what I was talking about you didn’t like it thats fine but that does help me nothing really has helped me none of your post have really talked about the design just good or bad. But anyways I know it's not that great I did it very fast and I’m not very proud of it but I don’t think it's THAT bad but Thats just my opinion. Keep the post coming guys I’m kind of getting into this lol.
AF

oooo on the background with the right computer i see now what your talking about your right thanks!!!

damn it's hard to read text without any commas :P

Originally posted by afguy91506
"It’s just red" we had to base it on one color **

Well, I didn't know that. You did not state that in your first post. It's a shame you had no more freedom in creating the piece. Ordered to use just red...Blahh. Tell your teacher of, Crave more artistic freedom ;)

Originally posted by afguy91506
...oooo on the background with the right computer i see now what your talking about your right thanks!!! ...

See, even I could have been more clear on what to type ;). And...you're welcome.

Originally posted by myself ;)
...But the graphic up on the left, is ok i guess. A net-thingy with with, what, a twirl on it ?...

And, for the record, I did comment on your original request, eh ?
Hehe...

Post what your changes to it in order to get more crit, and more constructive crit as we see that you're working on it, 'kay ?

thanks your the only one so far out of how many posts?? but anyways i aprecheate your help i'm working on the new one now almost done...

it would look much better if the fonts contrasted neachother

Some parts are just so blurry, the future text for exampel. You could try to add more color???

I have never heard of Illistrator ... hehe, just kidding dude. Just try to work more on the color scheme and the blurry parts and you could have a nice on . =)

lol oops..