factsheet

i'm in class and we have to make up our owh company make a logo with a bcard and factsheet and letterhead well i'm done with the factsheet. most of the stuff isnt true on it. and i only care on what ya'll think about the top graphic's. i just felt like keeping it semple and all so tell me what ya'll think??

http://www.geocities.com/afguy91506/hello.jpg

damn geocities.... you exceeded your data transfer

all u have to do is put a space after the link in the address bar then press enter it will work...
srry bout that.

i think u have allot of work to do on it. looks like a bad graphic that was riped off some amateur site. or looks like it was done it 45 sec.

2 min... and i dont thik your right about it srry i just dont take critisism that well. i havent finnished with the text part i just had to put that there fir the first stage of the project. nothing great i know and we could only base it around one color maybe i should have said that in the first place. the only part i dont like about it is the "designing the future" part looks alittle too plane to me. the wave thing in the corner is followed on my bcard and letterhead. maybe you have never seen a factsheet before... not sure but i can see maybe how it might resemble a "amateur site" but i've seen some of thoughs that dont look like that. FACT SHEET GUYS COME ON!! not gunna look so busy and out there like everything else!!! srry. have a nice day!!!
AF

If you don't take critisism that well, then don't ask what we think of it.

Ugly.

Nos.

damn righ skippy!

i didnt ask u to put down what i made only to give me ideas and Kranekick you dont have to have other people put your points across...

...so tell me what ya'll think??
...

This is what you ask of us. Now, if there is people who don't think your pic is good and tells you so....where have they failed ?

You know, if anything, that reaction to crit is kinda thankful to get if for a person who likes to give it to somebody...;)

Lighten up, man. Take the crit and try and do something of it instead...

My crit:

I am sorry, but I have to agree with the rest. It doesn't look good.
For starters its all red. The "designing the future" is to blurry. The right hand computor has been selected poorly. I would like to have the text, the info, to be a bit smaller...But the graphic up on the left, is ok i guess. A net-thingy with with, what, a twirl on it ?