summer poster

teaser for coming summer events in youth café.


http://www.fuguforce.com/pub/pili-summer-web.jpg

size: A3 - full color

comments welcome.

i like it!!!!

the only thing id say was tone down the read on the text

gj dude!

I don't really like the text in the topright corner... why is it wobbly like that? Might want to change that.

Nice job otherwise.

i like the text in the top right, its adds a summer affect i think

Im with NL on this one. The text does have a summer feel but its too much information for that effect. If it was like 1 line of larger text or something it would look ok.

Otherwise great poster...and good reflection lol

everything is cool but i have to say i dont really like the red shadow effect on the summer text. maybe change the effect or color? i dot know but i have to agree something dosent quite fit.

red shadow ? there is no red shadow..

about the wobbly text, I too think it gives a 'enthusiastic' feeling and the info.. well it's a teaser remember. (for the ones interested: it's hollywood hills)

You said PILI...hihihihi... :D
In finnish that means the man little thingy... :D
"Dick summer" & All summer long at dickdick... :D

Well okey about the image...
Like the idea and it's done great but the topic Pili (:D)...
I would leave the shadow...The image has enought 3d in it that the topic don't have to come out imo.
Not sure about the font on the font in the right corner eighter...
Even if the reflective girl in the image is a bit "funny" I think that the whole image is pretty serious and should have a more serious text...
You will get the fun part of it even if the text ain't a funny font...
Well this is just my opinions :D

The poster is great, but the text with the dates on it blows, as does the yellow box. Something creative could be done with that, then the poster would be quite amazing

lol @ Bjorn's Pili b-****...

Im with spectra on the crits...

and ROFL @ NL's new avatar.. sorry dude.. x)