wat dose it need? ? ? ?

It feels like it needs a sense of motion, something to give it some kinetic energy, as others have stated, an accent or second element to establish the heirarchy of focus.

im with rodder
and the notion of a sence of focus...

in and of itself its fine
but when its captioned with a title as u did - the future is now
there needs to be a point of relevency (in most cases) - ie a relationship between them....

hope that helps
build on that
and your on your way

cheers
heathrowe

just make the tekst white no effects.

lol no idea why your commenting on such an old post but ty none the less

short and sweet... text is gay do something with it the background is good just needs more. peace!
AF