New user, wanting some feed back

hey just want to know what you think about my work, thanks
-Michael

http://www.e-leet.net/Lamah.jpg


and

http://www.e-leet.net/simplicity.jpg


thanks team

I like the 2nd one. In the bottom right corner of the 1st one, there's that edge...It's rather annoying. :-/

yeah Ill blend that off, Thanks for the feedback!

Contrary to the title, Simplicity is busy, sharp contrasts in colors and random polygonal shapes. Not a suiting name. Plus the text is horrid. Play with text until it fits in with the piece.

1337, I'm guessing you play cs, tfc or dod.

no I dont play lame halflife games. You just wish you bought that domain. =P And yes Its called simplicity because its supposed to be ironic. =P Which text too? Both?

all

well, what do you suggest, since my playing around didnt please you =) any think off the top of your head mo0chan?

think =thing

i like everyone on both of them except the type... mostly too dominate, takes away from the work.