pre-launch comments

Thanks for taking it in the spirit that it was meant

Oh yeah, thanks for reminding me, I left the last part out:

I hate you.


:eek: :( :o :D ;)

In your portfolio ... give me something to click! I'm not going to open a new window and type the URLs in to see your work (actually, I am, but most clients wont). I gave you layout C&C in your last post. :D

tom

I am doing the links for that right now. I just added the pop up script for the layout and now I am working on the rollovers for the little icons.

The whole site should be up in about 20 minutes.

Feel free to tear apart my writing and gimme some feedback on it. I haven't proofread anything yet.

http://partrauma.soktdesign.com/wtf/wtf.jpg

this is all i see ... and well ... wtf. is this what i'm supposed to be seeing?

Whoops, the new version is at www.swankstudios.com

That link is home to a new project.

Time for my comments. I don't know why but it gives a weird urge to eat. I like the brown, and that tree image - reminds me of some african desert. A cool and calm design.

I would make one change. On the home page, it says "Profits" where I would think "Benifits" would fit more. If it's a marketing strategy to use the word "profits", then I understand, but I don't think it works to well. No one has proffited anything yet. They will if they get a design through you, and that is the benifit.

. I don't know why but it gives a weird urge to eat.

Lord god will you not dry up this river of retardedness I see before me?

Anyway your site is pretty nice. I like it, it's really clean. easily navigated. I think that this version with the new text is a lot cleaner, snappier and more to the point with less fluff. no beating around the bush. Good job. ANd much better grammar :D

this is way better than the last actual version of swankstudios, which i believe was the one with the century gothic blue text :D

good job :D

btw i proofread the rest of the site and your content is fine :D

Coolness. Ice.

Thanks for the comments!