Vision Labs

http://www.visionlabsdesign.com

check out my site, it still need some work, but its almost there

comments and criticisims are welcome

Well first off, I was a bit shocked at how slow it loaded for being so simple, then I looked a little further and realised your bottom image is a 75k bitmap - Lol! Web design basics #1, optimize your graphics.

Its simple otherwise.

It might help to have some portfolio experience, at the moment I only have your word for your 'skills'.

ya show some work that you have done to show people how much experience you have in the field of web design

to say it's "vision labs" there's not alot of creativity or vision to that site...at all.

also you need to cut down the pic at the bottom as on IE with 1024*768 res. it adds a reeeally small scroll bar lol.

also are you foreign? on "web design" link you put "150$"

(i know that's how it's said but not how written) it shud b $150

maybe a small typo but you're tryin to impress here remember! ;)

also fluency or fluidity (that's wrong choice of words but something like that)
basically on "web design" you put "pricing" in italics and the rest in bold.
if this is deliberate to attract attention maybe change color/size/underline. make it OBVIOUS not ..hinted.

also you might want to put the main content (th text in the middle) in an iframe, as every page is the same, there's no point reloading previously used graphics. this way the content'l change, NOT the graphics (professional)

hope some of that helps

chris you have very good comments man, the most constructive so far.
reading your post helps a lot.

I like the site a lot, simple but elegant.
Minor changes to be made i think its nice overall.

thats really weird, the bitmap thing

if you click properties, it says its a gif, thats wut it was optimized as, an 8 color gif, but if i do save picture, it saves as a 75k bitmap, thats very strange

on my comp, the size of that image is only 5k

Either way, if its a .bmp or a .gif, 75k is pretty big for an image. with a site as small as yours your whole image folder should be under 75k.

hey cheers dreamdesign

made me go all gooie inside ;) lol

i'm just tryin to help, if i help ppl hopefully ppl help me, then we'll all do so much better in the big wide world.

(u can help me, i've left my website on the site showcase thing-HELP)

cheers

its weird, on my comp the image is only a 5 kilobyte gif, and if u click properties ont he site it says its a gif, but if you do save image it saves it as a 75k bmp, i duno why this is