Art and Poetry 2

some art and... poetry?! man I'm a sissy. :o

http://mywebpages.comcast.net/drgnsword2/innocence.jpg

Looks good.. the butter fly is really bright though... and you cant see some parts of the text when it gets down towards the bottom, but it just might be me... nice work...

The text reads pretty well here. But that butterfly *is* overly bright compared to the rest of the design. Otherwise nice work.

tell me something.. the poem says 'innocence is lost again'....
that picture of butterfly... is it perhaps his sprit? that lost innocence?
it would explain the glowing edges around it.... and that strong brightness (a bit too much, though) **could it be an 'inner glow'?? or 'lighting effects'??** .. in any case, reduce it....

one more question ::.. did you try to accomplish that the statue looks up at the butterfly... or just to look up?

don't get me wrong.. i like the idea.. and i like the realization..... just those two small things :/


greetings

Very nice. The poem was realy sweet. Awesome.