2nd pict up

hey, thanks for the response on my first pict, i figured i would try a second. still looking for feedback. cheers mates:D


[url]http://www.okoto.net/documents/bitmap(50small).jpg[/url]

thats pretty good, but the colors seem to conflict with each other

I'm not sure if you wanted critique or not..
Try making the scan lines smaller and making the actual eye a deeper blue. The background looks awsome, is it a doctored photo or purely photoshop? The logo in the bottom right looks very cool. Very nice work, looks like a splash for a computer game..

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It´s good, only tho I hate when inversed colors are obviouse... But that´s just me. It´s nice.

thanks for the replies and to coments on the colors, I was intentionally going for it but oh well. I did a few touch up in light of your responses. It's my first attempt at this type of picture but what the he** why not. For your viewing pleasure I putting the old link and the new link so u can compare and commment

old pict
[url]http://okoto.net/documents/bitmap(50small).jpg[/url]

new pict
[url]http://okoto.net/documents/bitmap(50try2).jpg[/url]

Cheers :D

2nd one is much much better in my opinion