Could ya check this out?..

I am fairly new to photoshop and I'm working on a layout for a web page. I got a ugly layout i tried, on display at http://preunion.com but I am looking to make one that is a little more.. better?.. I came up with this http://preunion.com/beta/beta.html but I'm still not happy wiht it. So now I am working on something kina.. violent.. (an attempt to display something raw and grungy maybe..)
I was wondering what you guys thought on those layouts and what you guys think of the following style.

v.ONE

v.TWO

(for a logo..)

thanks for your time and sorry about spelling/grammer.
- gratis

i dont like the Version One if you use the babe face use it once multiple times gets boring and kinda annoying. Version 2 on the other hand is pretty clean and still gets the "violent" look with still being clean. although i do believe it needs maybe a bit more blood or something a bit too much empty space. Good start on your "violent" look id like to see the finished product =)