grunge, need suggestions

hey guys, well i have never really done grunge before, so i decided to try today. i didn't follow any tutorials with this one and the typo isn't really that great. i'm not completely done, i would just like some suggestions anyone may have.

http://www.webimpulse.net/images/escape.jpg

there ya go

Hmmm... I don't like the white stuff. Looks *too* artifical. I'm not sure what I would do with it. Maybe blur it or change the opacity of it, but it just looks out of place to me.

The rest looks good though.

ok thanks.

i updated the pic. made all the white black, maybe it looks better now.

/me likes it...wait there i go again, anywayz it needs some mroe touchups to make it look a lil better, but coming along nicely

Yep. I like that a lot better.

It looks pretty good... though the black should blend in more, it looks like you just threw it on top.

If you know what I mean?

Try to blend it better...

To be really honest, I don't see anything done to the picture other than maybe color change.

The black patches, err, looks out of place. I'm just being honest, not mean.

yea i understand what youre saying. i expected replies like this considering ive never done grunge before in my entire life, lol. it was just a little experimentation i was doing. maybe ill try it again today