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May 27th 2002#50168 Report
Member since: Mar 18th 2001
Posts: 54
I'm trying to start up a webpage, and I just made a "coming soon" splash page until I finish a webpage to put there.

The link is http://syphon.dynip.com/mattrix

I can't think of a name for it yet, hence the "sitenamehere.com"
But, the text at the top of the graphic where the site name goes looks too plain. I want to do something with it, but I can't find anything to fit the graphic.

Does the rest look okay?
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May 27th 2002#50177 Report
Member since: Mar 18th 2001
Posts: 54
Okay, I just did a little grunge look to the text at the top... how does that look with the rest of it?
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May 27th 2002#50218 Report
Member since: Apr 23rd 2002
Posts: 312
umm u mite wanna put it somewhere else online so ppl can see it when u arent online....
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May 27th 2002#50229 Report
Member since: Mar 18th 2001
Posts: 54
Ok, sorry about that...
It's now posted at http://syphon.cjb.net
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May 27th 2002#50236 Report
Member since: May 21st 2002
Posts: 537
pretty nice.


my only suggestion would be to take the arrow out. It looks great but I've seen it too many times. that's what I would do if it was mine.
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May 27th 2002#50238 Report
Member since: May 27th 2002
Posts: 1028
Nice image. There is something about the blue that stands out in an awkward way. I think that a shade of blue that light doesn't work with the rest of the image. I guess it's because everything around the blue is worn and faded and the blue itself looks new. That's just my opinion and I'm probably being overly picky.
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