website layout

well me and a couple of my friends are coming together to create a website company and well i had to make the layout and scripting(pretty much everything) and i wanna know what i can do to make this better use your imagination to see what everything is gonna be. all i can say is there is gonna be like 3 iframes and a imap.. so ya.. tell me what you think

http://www.boomspeed.com/sir_ant/layoutrough.gif

hummm, start by fixing up those jaggies there

anyway, i'm guessing by the design you are aming to design websites for the younger generation, right?

i can't really tell much at the moment with out any content or links etc.. but i do think it does need a bit more work, JMO

well ya now that i think about it it does kinda look like a younger generation theme. i just didnt want to do something boring and create a frame site that doesnt take much effort. i kind of want the site to show what talent i have so on so forth. anyone think i should have a front page which has links .. one going to a simple frame site and another going to this layout.? or is that to complex?

it looks hand drawn

Yeah. lots of jaggies around the corners.

Also, I think the masthead is a tad big...good to show off your logo, but does it need to be *really* big?

Also, a drastic contrast between the true white and the blue & black. Maybe fill in the bkgd with a darker colour, or some scan lines, or a grid or something.

The nav bar at the side looks a bit like a 2-headed sex-play-toy to me....but that could be just me.

Maybe do some Bevel & Emboss to the Tribal 'caps' and give them a bit of depth or something (?)

fix the jaggies.... and if you didnt want it "boring" try doing something about the 3 squares to the right + the main table (the big square in the middle)

they look very borin IMO....

but besides that it still needs some work.. but try fixing some of this and ill think youll know what i mean

Originally posted by sir_ant
well ya now that i think about it it does kinda look like a younger generation theme. i just didnt want to do something boring and create a frame site that doesnt take much effort. i kind of want the site to show what talent i have so on so forth. anyone think i should have a front page which has links .. one going to a simple frame site and another going to this layout.? or is that to complex?

sorry to say, but i think the site does look very boring. everything just sits on the page, nothing connects. jaggies have already been killed so i won't kill that subject again.

looks very amateur-ish if there is such a word...very plain, very simple, and u say 3 people collaborated on this?