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May 9th 2002#46670 Report
Delisk
Member since: Aug 10th 2001
Posts: 793
Just made this this for fun...

http://www.geocities.com/deliskdesign/sun_beach.htm

Any comments are welcome....

I took the picture from www.freefoto.com
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May 13th 2002#47393 Report
zyconium
Member since: May 1st 2002
Posts: 3034
heh
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May 13th 2002#47395 Report
Delisk
Member since: Aug 10th 2001
Posts: 793
heh


OK now I have to guest wath this mean....

Is it a good heh or a bad one?
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May 13th 2002#47396 Report
zyconium
Member since: May 1st 2002
Posts: 3034
oh, its a good heh
heh, as in Like ur ad
but its funny
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May 14th 2002#47512 Report
neko-tokyo
Member since: Apr 3rd 2002
Posts: 42
Its close to "Sun of a Beach" ... well, thats what I thought of. heh.

But nice layout.
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May 14th 2002#47513 Report
neko-tokyo
Member since: Apr 3rd 2002
Posts: 42
PS. Seems a little bottom heavy with white.

my thoughts ...

1. Reduce size of slides
or
2. make title a little more white.

ok, lunch time!
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May 14th 2002#47620 Report
spider883
Member since: May 14th 2002
Posts: 7
i like it.
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May 14th 2002#47621 Report
*NL*
Member since: Apr 5th 2001
Posts: 2544
the ad is really nice... has the right atmosphere...

though there are a few things you could work on:

the slides are beveled too much, they should be more flat.
Make it in english, not french ;) heh, just kidding...

i like it.


spider883, please give better critique or suggestions. It is nice and all for Delisk to know that you like it, but please be more precise why you like it.
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May 15th 2002#47760 Report
xr650lvr
Member since: May 9th 2001
Posts: 399
cool...good job.
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May 15th 2002#47768 Report
*NL*
Member since: Apr 5th 2001
Posts: 2544
Originally posted by xr650lvr
cool...good job.


you too, xr650lvr
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