Work In progress

Give me some criticism, what to add?

Pic

I think the pic looks great. The only thing i would fix is the border. The blue makes the somewhat rough (rough in a good way) look more pansy. Its like putting a too-too on a pit bull. Know what i mean. But some people like the contrast, so that's why it's just my opinion

nice tho

Perhaps making the blue a different color?
I was going to add more to the bottom white that would fit more with the blue.

The picture is supposed to look kinda dream-ish hazy and all, and the rest of it is kinda like... i cant explain. Its supposed to contrast kinda, cause its supposed to be 2 different places.

the piece doesn't seem to match at all...

the colors don't match
bad font choice (IMO)
bad text effect to use for this

seems like u just frankensteined
it to make a paper, not to much thought
put into it...

sorry to be so negative

I can take negative comments.

But... they dont help me at all, perhaps some suggestions?

Im not done yet, and will do more to tie it in, and I know they are different colors, the contrast was something i was going for. im sick of pics that look like people did it in a greyscale, than colorized it so its all the same hue... boring.

Kinda hard to explain my idea on this pic, its kinda abstract but ill try.

The part inside the blue is the dream. Everything else i want it to be like youre looking sinto someone elses dream, so everythiong outside needs to contrast, to convey that it isnt part of teh dream. Like whats inside the blue is like a television screen in someone elses dream.

yea, well i figured that the inside was a dream
but it looks like u just got a double exposed pic
and put some blue frame on it and blurred it...

and yea, colors are good but your colors clash, sorry to say,
it's plaid w/ stripes...

maybe make the frame look more consistent w/ the rest, or u could just get rid of the frame all together since if it were a dream you could see all ... hard to put into words.

repetative text is just confusing IMO, and the styles of everything on the page don't match, metallic text, which is blurred...

trendy frame shape, but blurred, makes it look sloppy IMO

this is all IMO, obviously, but i'm pointing that out b/c i'm no more qualified to be razzing your work than a blind chimp. I've had no art classes, nothing about typography, not out of highschool, nothing of that sort...so if u read this w/ any seriousness about what i say maybe wait for a second opinoin

this is what i think...but it might just be my stupid mind...i've been
having a block for the longest time...can't make a layout...wallpaper...little sig i made but racist people


ranting...ah well
keep up the productiveness!

metallic?

didnt realise text was mettalic.

Ya i know the border got blurry, i need to fix that up. It wont be.

well if it's not meant to looky crhomy then
it's got that gradient thing going on

Ya its got a slight gradient on it.