mi first shot at a wall paper

please give suggestions and comments about it. thx!

here

Its WAY too plain. All it is is a picture of her with some text... You definately need to spend more time on it and add more to it.

like wut should i add, i kno its plain but it was mi frist shot and i was dry on ideas, that is y i came here to get suggestions and ideas. thx.

it's way too plain, you just got pics and text, no showcase
of talent...

deja vu...


well, maybe some nice background scenery, lush, vivid colors
smaller people no frilly text...

something nice and scenic...
and don't change the brightness/etc of the two pics
keep it all consistent... IMO

looks cool for CD cover though!

Try making it more clear and ordered (sorry I'm just addicted to straight:45, 90 degree angles in everything )

While I enjoy a good jessica alba picture anytime, they are correct. Not much going on.

Perhaps in the upper right, where it is very blank, play with some layer modes with more photos of her. And hey, you might even think about radial blurs and whatnot.

Although I am a PS n00b, I have had a few design courses and have learned a thing or two about overall design in relation to use of space and line and how the viewer's eye can be lead to certain areas.

First, I think the two photos you have in there are good picks and you have a nice positioning of them where they are. You definitely have too much negative (blank) space though. I agree with maybe a subtle scenic background or even a night time city scape pic towards the upper left corner or even as the background with the opacity lowered might add more interest to it. I also like the idea of a couple more pics maybe overlapping a little and at subtle contrasts. Also, I guess if you are a Dark Angel watcher, you will instantly know who she is but your text seems to get lost in the image a tad. You may want to change the position or the color/brightness of the text to make it stand out a little more. It is a great start to some Alba drooling wallpaper though. JMO -k, enough babble from me :o

yeah it is kinda plain. maybe u should have a background other than a color. just a suggestion. cya

wow i havent seen an 800x600 wallpaper since i set my res to 1280x1024...small :eek:

hell yeah, im at 1280x1024 and it kix ass. 800x600 is just to small for work n stuff. even though my double moniter setup has on moniter that is 800x600(piece of crap moniter). MSZ try to strech it out if thats what u need depending on ur resolution.