can u help me out?

im stuck

i had a idea of a new wallpaper for my desktop

so i started workign on it

then i ended up with this

click me

but when i look at it it doesnt seem done

its missing sumthing but i dont what to do with it

give me some suggestion ppl i really need ur help on this one

thx and peace out

It just seems a little dull. Might need some more white or some of that neon kinda green like it your sig.

i need more suggestions

peace out

too blurry and dull

i think if you are going to make those radial blur starbursts with a color dodge or whatever then you should make the white part actually be white, and not fade it, because then it doesnt have the same effect.

also it looks like it is trying to have that technical look but the shapes being so blurred and rounded..it just doest really work out.

i would say take off alot of the blur, brighten up those starbursts and make the shapes cleaner and more technical

ill try and do it again and see which pix looks better

thx for the sugg.

peace out