New style (for me:)

My first attempt at this style, what do you think?

http://www.ts3ddesigns.com/images/inthelight.jpg

I think: try again. no, seriously though, you have to take out the lens flare. There's a ...what do you call it? tacit outlaw on lens flares.

I think the rest if fine but rather simple. You need to play around more with polygons and lighting effects to make that image have something in it.

There really isn't much to this... It has no substance, really. I don't think the fonts mesh well, but i do like the one on the right, the light is too solid looking, and lens flares.. eek, only use them when you need em.. Keep playing a bit, maybe try to find your own style first, because it seems you were trying to be trendy (maybe I'm wrong), and through that you can do almost anything.

geez another person with lens flare com on man

thats like back in the dayz when u didnt know hoe to mess the the lasso tools and polygon tools

its to old skool now

its was tyte then but now ppl used it to much and it got played out bad

really bbaddddddddddddddddddd

so no more flares ok

and whats the pix is ok i guess sep the words in the light u should make the light hit it not make a corona around it and i like the words on the right though

so um good luck man and try another one and post it without the flares and all aiight

peace out homie