HEY! constructive criticism please (wallpaper)

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comments, good and bad appreciated. thanks.

The red thingy is pretty cool. That white dashed line I'm not sure about, maybe because it looks like a selection outline or something.

Pretty cool.

Looks good. The white dashed line is not a problem for me. What I dislike is the word in your red thingie and the right-bottom corner.

don't like it, it's a bit cliché .... the arrow, the unreadable text .... the blurry warped explosion in the middle, the square grids ... I'm not saying it doesn't look nice ... cuz the explosion thingy looks very cool .... but I don't like the concept ...

thanks for the comments, i appreciate them.


could the people who didn't really like it, elaborate on what they would change? it always help to get new ideas.

I think the explosion is awesome. Nice choice of grid, and EXCELLENT colors! some really great texture in there.

get rid of the arrow (have I seen THAT a lot), the confusing 000, the completely unreadable text, the whole "promo wall" thing. What I hate most is how XIPNET has a black box underneath it, I say take it out totally.

Make this a desktop wallpaper, don't add some junk in the corners just to make it a web wallpaper. Add something else to give it focus. It would be great as a piece of graphic art, not a business promotion. That's my opinion of course.

I would drop the text in the red thingie and drop the grunge thingie in the bottom right corner.

The text in the top and the small text in the bottom don´t look good together. The reason for that is because one of the text is a bit, more digital looking and the other text is a bit softer. maybe make the 2 text´s a bit more looking.

You get me?

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