Any comments on this pic?

This is the first time I have done one of those dark thingy pics =]
Here is the link, can any of you tell me if you like/hate it. Don't worry, I don't take nothing offensively.


http://www.layinbody.com/jd/2dpics/depression.jpg

It is my first try, and I do want to try to get some opinions so I can get better.

Ach!... another dark thingy picture..... :p

J/k... very nicely done. You should perhaps change the "soul away" to the same style as the other text... i had some problems finding it :o

Pretty nice work man......keep it up....i agree on the text maybe make it stand out a little more....but if you dont want to thats fine too.....overall i think you did a nice job....:D

Thanks! I did end up changing the text the same as the other ones and it actually was even harder to see it.

Any ideas of what I can do ? Maybe add some little light around the text or somethign to make it stand out....

Uhm.. don't overdo it. It looks very good they way it is. Elements hidden in the picture is always cool.