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Dec 14th 2001#23338 Report
xcky315x
Member since: Dec 14th 2001
Posts: 4
http://www.multimania.net/ckyaudio/Symbol.gif

Any comments/suggestions are welcome.I think I'm improving :D
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Dec 17th 2001#23642 Report
tornupinside
Member since: Mar 27th 2001
Posts: 2237
I'm not sure about it, there isn't really anything in it that draws my attention, maybe you should make that "eye" more visible?

In designing things you should try to direct the persons eye toward what you want them to focus on. Thos squirrely things lead my eye away from the eye in the center and out into the black background. The text isn't very catchy so it doesn't draw attention either... over all....

keep trying.
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Dec 17th 2001#23693 Report
xcky315x
Member since: Dec 14th 2001
Posts: 4
Thanx for the tips
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Dec 17th 2001#23696 Report
Czak
Member since: May 24th 2001
Posts: 358
The red tinged text, I'm not fond of that.. it looks.. strained.

Yeah, darken down the eye, or get rid of it, and maybe lose the scan lines.
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