please check

i want to show you a new layout i just started working on. As you are looking at this, what i belive horrible attempt, rember I am new to photoshop and I am here to learn so please don't tell me it looks like cr*ap because i know that it does, I just wanna learn. I dont at the moment plan to put this on a web site. Here: http://grafixrealm.netfirms.com/test.jpg

PS: I know it is a little large and blank (duh).

Hmm...I don't really like the colours, or the way its layed out.....sorry I couldn't be of more help :(

first off, IMO anyways...
i don't think you should use anything that
you don't think looks good.

and on a side note,
IMO is a dip brand here
i.e. guacamole, clam, spinach etc...


back to the subject:

Yea, I don't like the colors,
and the font the page is also
plain...and it seems as though you don't have
any idea as to what the layout would be used
for.

plan out what you're going to be hving on the page,
so that you know how many space to allow etc...

ehhh.. i dont know man, the style seems way to un-practicle, it's sorda hard to even make out that it's a layout