Lounge cards , need reviews

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v224/plasticboy04/lounge%20card/lounge_cards2.jpg

I call them lounge cards , because although they look and act like a normal business cards, their primary purpose is to be given in nonformal places and situations (lounge clubs, bars, parties).
I need your reviews. Thanks in advance !


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hmm, personal ad on a business card. seems a bit...i dunno, direct? if i was talking to a girl and she hands me a card with her stats on it i'd be...yeah.

whatever the case, design is interesting. i like it, i'm not sure if it would work better with more refined linework or not. colors are nice and it flows well overall though, nice stuff.

chris

I gave her a call... we're going out this Saturday.


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Looks good. If you're making it a folding card, what's going on the inside? Condoms? It would look nice with a UV glossy coating w/rounded corners. http://www.overnightprints.com (great prices too)

lol, noway, the content will be changed (we're working on it ) , it looks to offensive to everybody . I made several sketches fro the inside and i'm gonna post them soon .
Thanks for the link , they've really got better prices than where i usually print my stuff .

been a while i didnt post ! yea nice idea
your really good at those curly plant ;) ,the switch of color is a nice touch! and for the folding am not sure , will wait to see the content !
nice job! think am gonna have to post mine !! lol

Wow, this is pretty slick.

I've been thinking about having some cards printed up, and I love seeing really unconventional designs.

I just watched American Psycho the other night, so maybe I've got business cards on the brain (if you've seen it, remember the business card scenes? Those were great).

Anyway, I'd say that aside from content, you've got something pretty nice here. I agree about the rounded corners though. And something really cool has to go on the inside. Like, leave all the text for the inside of the card, and just have your name on the outside, or something.

I like them Might be a little difficult to hold for people with lots of business cards but otherwise nice ideea.

But if you have a lot of room inside.. why not put just the name on the front? it would clear up the clutter and let people notice more of the design - and you could make the name text bigger and more "integrated" with the curlicues and stuff