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new bus.card!

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Apr 6th 2005#167299 Report
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Apr 6th 2005#167300 Report
Member since: Aug 12th 2002
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I don't want to be an ass here...
but I think it's a bit too plain...

Come on Zyc you can do better than that...
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Apr 6th 2005#167313 Report
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yeah man I agree totally I'll post a revision here in a sec! complete with updates to
text spacing :D
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Apr 6th 2005#167315 Report
Member since: Jul 10th 2002
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Zyco,

You need to present them with some sort of depth. Everything looks so much worse being displayed in a browser window. Anyone in print design knows that after a few weeks/month of looking at a job on there monitor, how refreshing it finally is to see the finished product in person. Computers kill print design for viewing. Do something like this...

www.tdee.ca/zyc.jpg

That way we can sort of get a feel for how they would look. Seeing them huge in a browser window sucks.

For design, ditch the stripe on the top, lead the type some more, indent the stuff under your name. Use some more weights on that font. I really like the back. I love bold statements, but make the text waaaay smaller and dont centre it.

They aren't that bad, just the presentation kills it.
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Apr 7th 2005#167319 Report
Member since: May 13th 2004
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I actually like it. Just simple and on point presentation of your logo and your website. On the other hand, I like simplicity...business cards are business cards and they don't need to be super flashy.
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Apr 7th 2005#167323 Report
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Apr 10th 2005#167381 Report
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i like the second one best the first one is kinda of empty your trying to sell your design dont forget that ;)
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