Some business card

thanks Michaelp and malibu for the advices, I'll keep them in mind

Pixel Tiger, why would it be cheap because it's in B&W? It's by choice if I didn't use colours, not by budget limit.

To be honest, I think the card's too busy. I like the straight lines on the building...but I really think that there are too many "toys" on display. I would keep the office building look and highlight the actual contact information...my eye was confused as to where to go.

I like the starkness of the design concept though. It looks credible...but maybe a more solid font (even Times Roman...Verdana???) would enhance the card's overall effect.

Have you considered working with shading and opactity to accent the actual information? The building could be lightened to accent the contact info.

Just some thoughts...nice work!

For me everything looks the same size. and makes it look a little cramped. Maybe make some of the elements smaller. The building image looks good.


On another note, using photoshop for type is ok if you are printing yourself. As long as you are working at 300dpi+cmyk, it should be fine.

Alright, I updated it. I fixed the aligment (well I think...)

I 'lightened' the graphic to focus more on the text and I present it like Spectra said... because it's a good idea. Tell me what you think of it now

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