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Nov 19th 2004#162994 Report
Member since: Nov 18th 2004
Posts: 17
Hey, Im new to this forum. Well at least to posting on it. Ive been a lurker for a bit. Anyways, I made this peice based on the suggestion that I should make something using the quote on it. Take a gander...

http://img102.imageshack.us/my.php?loc=img102&image=dreammakers2.jpg

Critiques always welcome.
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Nov 22nd 2004#163121 Report
Member since: Sep 6th 2001
Posts: 3893
I think it looks pretty good, the only thing that I see that I dont really like is the amount of noise in the background sunset pictures, maybe blur it a little (but not too much). Other than that I think it looks pretty cool.
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Nov 23rd 2004#163135 Report
Member since: Nov 18th 2004
Posts: 17
Hmm, I didnt add any noise. I just need a better camera. Ill see what I can do to change it.
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Nov 23rd 2004#163136 Report
Member since: Jul 12th 2004
Posts: 88
i really like the image. the photography and the graphic elements (lines, the hand) are well integrated - the tree branches blend nicely with the hand, the foliage with the clouds, overall smooth transitions, while the lines add direction, focus and contrast - very nice =)

i'm not too sure about the typography though. i can't put my finger on it, but it's either the font, the size, the positioning or a combination of the three.

as fusiun said, it's too bad about the noise in the sky pic, it doesn't match the clarity/cleanliness of the other photo
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