A little check up

I've been working on a banner for a webhosting company for a little while and this is the second concept I've come up with... They wanted something related to the games they host servers on, so I thought something related to war games would fit the best.

This is only one letter, I wanted to show you the texture and where I was going to see how people like it...

I'd really need your opinions on this one. thx

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The character seems out of place. Make his pants a little more gritty/dark.
Other than that GJ!

That guy won't stay there, it was just for the presentation, but thanks for the comment.

And with 40 views, I only have 1 comment? :(

heh, I'm not loved :eek:

i'm not sure what you meant by only one letter (are you using the big one or the little ones?). big one looks good - nice solid stone texture, i like the details (blood, scratches, "sector b", bullet holes). not sure what those squiggly lines in the background are though, or why some metal sheets have been bolted to the concrete. a lot of detail is lost on the smaller ones.

and i think the guy looks pretty cool, even if it was just for the presentation, gives the blood purpose /a reason to be there.

[QUOTE=paperling]i'm not sure what you meant by only one letter (are you using the big one or the little ones?). big one looks good - nice solid stone texture, i like the details (blood, scratches, "sector b", bullet holes). not sure what those squiggly lines in the background are though, or why some metal sheets have been bolted to the concrete. a lot of detail is lost on the smaller ones.

and i think the guy looks pretty cool, even if it was just for the presentation, gives the blood purpose /a reason to be there.[/QUOTE]

When finished, I will have the whole gamerslobby with that texture. I will probably use both sizes, because I will have to resize it to fit the whole name in the banner. Those lines will be removed also, I just didn't take time to clean the background and the metal sheets are there to make the concrete more destroyed then it seems (if that make sense), but I might redo it. Thank you for your comments

I don't have much time to work on it, but here's a lil update


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The G looks good with the blood and bulletholes, you gotta make the rest of the letters not so boring now.

Add some grafitti to one of the letters??

Like they were saying, the letters look a little bland. Maybe make each of them a little more individualistic. Oh, and that guy you had on there... you should think of a way to put him back in there. Just a suggestion.