Business Card (2 versions)

Made these for the site in the card... colors can be changed, but that blue is from the site and the orange doesn't look bad with it.

http://slonik.homestead.com/files/mayhemcard.jpg
http://slonik.homestead.com/files/mayhemcard1.jpg

Some of the other entries can be seen in THIS thread.

compared to the other posts on that site - you have them beat - i would leave it the way it is the orange and the blue look good ;)

Ok. I made two more designs and will probably make ever more... so I moved them all to here:

http://slonik.homestead.com/files/cards.html

The only thing I would recommend is lowering the opacity of the M's in the backround a bit.

the second link in your first post (next to last in your second post) is the best. If you don't win - save it for another company.

hey I like the black ones... don't really like the ones with all the "m" letters on the bg - they look a bit like wrapping paper

well to be honest they look like something you would get made at kinkos. The [M]'s have to go on the white ones. Also I would work with the placement of the info, they all seem to be crammed in the corners. It probably would look nicer if you give them some room to breathe. Overall there just isnt much sensitivity in any of them. Looks like random placement in a few of them and I dont see much reasoning in them.

[QUOTE=redeye]well to be honest they look like something you would get made at kinkos. The [M]'s have to go on the white ones. Also I would work with the placement of the info, they all seem to be crammed in the corners. It probably would look nicer if you give them some room to breathe. Overall there just isnt much sensitivity in any of them. Looks like random placement in a few of them and I dont see much reasoning in them.[/QUOTE]

I agree. The typography really is terrible in these. It seems like you are trying to do something, but you aren't sure of what. Instead of knocking out 6 different versions, why not work REALLY hard on just one or two and see what you can do.