2nd ever vector pic!...

Well here is my next pic im working on, still in progress any feedback appreciated!
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I love elisha cuthbert! Only 2 critiques I have is to get rid of some of the darkness of the eyes, and maybe tone down the lips. Nice job

2nd? Holy frick you don't know how jealous I am right now.

-The darkness around her eyes is WAY too much, tone that down.
-The brown for her nostrils may be too much, maybe a lighter color?

Looks great, I am friggin jealous. :D

pretty sweet!
Now you just have to go in to details.
blending everything together and then make all those small shapes.
The eyes are a bit too dark yeah, and the shadow on the left side is pretty wierd, use the same color you have on the right side.

I saw her last night on a rerun of Conan. Didn't care for her 80's hair cut.

Good job

Thanks for the replies, comments and suggestions!.
thats my next step really in making the branch between basic to detailed, will keep you update dwith how it goes!

Looks great shorn. One suggestion would be to adjust the shape of the shadow below her chin. It sort of makes it look like she has a double-chin. Other than that, streamline the colors a bit and it'll be perfect!

Yea ill adjust teh chin, do people think teh hair works as it is ( with straight lines) or do you think it needs a bit more detail?

Since you seem to have gotten most of the basic work down, focus on the hair.

detail is always nice

I like the illustration it's very nice. Illustrator hair is going to make you grow white hair I know it has this effect on bjorn...and me....and a few others

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