Orange Octane v4

Ok, I made some adjustments including the absence of the nozzle which I didn't really get to look right as any character in "Octane" so it's gone altogether for now.


Logo #4


I know it's not an award-winning design but I think it qualifies as a respectable logo that I can be comfortable putting on a business card, brochure and Website.

Comments and constructive criticism are much welcomed as always.

Awesome. That is exactly what I picture, looks great.

Very nice! It has definately improved since your first design.

To be quite honest I thought the light black shadow behind "Orange" looked great, it really made it stand out. I think it looks too generic and bland without the shadow.

On the other hand I like this logo a lot! It is very well thought out and expresses the name well.

Maybe a drop shadow just under the orange itself to give it some dimension without crossing over into the cliche factor?

Pretty nice.
I wouldn't use black for the octane text... just looks "cheap" somehow...
Then I wouldn't put those 2 words ontop of eachother...
Otherwise nice :D

Here I added another version with a drop shadow on the orange and the word "Octane" not overlapping. The black stays, but I think I do like it without the overlap. I'm undecided on the orange's drop shadow.

ALTERATION

second one, I like the text better on the second one... but lower the shadow distance and opacity on the orange or just drop it.

awesome job

overall i like it but i'm not big on that typeface, at least not the non-italics. i like "octane" in the italics but "orange" just isn't quite working for me. if i figure out why i'll let you know.

i'm unsure on the orange as well, the concept isn't bad but maybe it's a bit too cartoony? just thinking out loud...

chris

I agree with 3jorn on the text-color. I think dark grey (example) would look much better and professional. Also I wouldn't overlap the two words. Lower the drop shadow distance indeed.

Other then that I'd like to see the "Fresh squeezed...design" in a well chosen handwriting font and I'd love to see a pic with the nozzle in one of the letters, although you say it doesn't look good. Also, maybe a little green - dark green gradient on the leaves?

I think you should be 100% satisfied with your product before using it in brochures and stuff but overall I think it looks clean and pretty professional.