illustrated a poem

poem i banged out for school in five minutes, though people seemed to dig it.

see if you dig the decorations i did for it.

http://supahsekzy.com/art/redwire-low.jpg

I dig the illustrations/decorations and the poem is pretty good, but I don't really like the typography. I know you don't want a really wacked out font, but that seems to be out of place... I don't know, anyone else know what I am saying? :p

I really dig the illustration/poem combination.

The concept of the poem is cool but I think the words could be better chosen/the prose could be better. But that's just me.

hihi - I think it's cute. It's like a pamphlet for an activist brotherhood.