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That blak competition.

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Jun 7th 2004#152645 Report
Member since: Aug 12th 2002
Posts: 1693
Gave the blak competition a try.
Hmm maybe i should go back to work again :P

http://www.3jorn.com/stuff/black.gif

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http://www.3jorn.com/stuff/blak_shoe.gif
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Jun 7th 2004#152657 Report
Member since: May 13th 2004
Posts: 43
that looks like a pair of generics I was ashamed to wear as a kid.. :P
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Jun 7th 2004#152672 Report
Member since: May 16th 2004
Posts: 11
Humm it's good work ! Maybe the bear looks strange on a shoe ...Anyway the shoe itself is very well done
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Jun 7th 2004#152692 Report
Member since: Mar 25th 2002
Posts: 1143
Love the pinked B!! great idea. Perhaps a bit more definition of the sneaker (thats what you folks across the pond call it?), although I can see that if it is going against a white background why you went with the option you did.

Having said all of that, I don't get the concept. I haven't read the brief so tread wearily in critique at this point, but why the bear and the sneaker? No detriment, just asking you to explain your fulfilment of the brief
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Jun 7th 2004#152693 Report
Member since: Mar 25th 2002
Posts: 1143
Looked again and I am digging the design, I would be tempted to add more contrast to the outlines or details of the sneaker and maybe to simplify the pinking on the letter B form (thinking about printing clarity etc, better it be distinct and simplified than complex and indistinct). Also I would darken the stitched look a tad.
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Jun 8th 2004#152713 Report
Member since: Feb 18th 2004
Posts: 736
Looks good. The 'B' on the sneaker tongue looks wrong though. The perspective doesn't seem quite right too me.

Make any bigger sizes? :p
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