what? Redeye is still alive?

hello all,

I havent posted anything for a very very long time. That doesnt mean I havent been doing a lot =). Anyway I guess I should show something. Heres a little ad for AZ TV to be in desert living (magazine I work for) The old ad was a piece of crap (I didnt design it) so they have asked me to redo it. Anyway tell me what you think.

EDIT : NEW ONE AGAIN

http://www.linequality.com/images/az3.jpg
Changed it up a bit I think it gives it a bit more balance to the page.

Cool... I'm new to this forum, so nice to meet you, Redeye!


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What, you again? *sharpens pitchfork* Out ye wanker! :p

How's it been going dude?

Hey, I love simple ads like this. The image is cool and retro looking. I don't like the font however. It sort of appears as if it has a vertical stretch on it. It looks decent as the "tune in." part, but not for the footer text at all. I would substitute it for something different all together. It's probably the corporate font though isnt it? Also, I don't like the lowercase "t" in "tune in" as well as a period. Either use proper an uppercase "T" with a period or lowercase it and ditch the punctuation. It looks funny and it doesn't do anything design wise other then upset typographers. :p

Otherwise *thumbs up*

Quick note: the scan lines are going through the actual television set, not just the screen. This is apparent in the upper right corner.

Other than that, i like it

Nos.

[QUOTE=Spectra]Hey, I love simple ads like this. The image is cool and retro looking. I don't like the font however. It sort of appears as if it has a vertical stretch on it. It looks decent as the "tune in." part, but not for the footer text at all. I would substitute it for something different all together. It's probably the corporate font though isnt it? Also, I don't like the lowercase "t" in "tune in" as well as a period. Either use proper an uppercase "T" with a period or lowercase it and ditch the punctuation. It looks funny and it doesn't do anything design wise other then upset typographers. :p

Otherwise *thumbs up*[/QUOTE]

Wow thanks so much, I was working with another piece were I stretch the typeface a bit and it must have carried over. Didnt even notice. Thanks alot I fixed it and I do believe it looks better. Also I add some illumination on the tube so it looks more like an old tv.

[QUOTE=Nostalgia]Quick note: the scan lines are going through the actual television set, not just the screen. This is apparent in the upper right corner.

Other than that, i like it

Nos.[/QUOTE]

Fixed before I knew it =) thanks though