new intro page

Im going to redo my entire site and bring it back better than ever... I have a draft of my intro page made, what do you think? Any suggestions on improvement are appreciated.

http://www.illumindesign.net/previews/intro.jpg

any ideas for a first layout would be appreciated too


Endat

I really like your logo type design. I'm not too fond of the sphere and the 3d text at the bottom though or the wall. I think your splash page would still be really strong without those elements. Personally I think it would look great with just the type logo on the faded grey background and leave the illuminate your experience flat like the rest of your type.

Looks real good bro, keep up the good work.

I revised a little and got rid of the wall & floor and kept it a lower gradient to see how it would look... I also made the orb a little more clear, as you can tell from the shadow and gamma. The 3D text has been brightened a little as well.

Intro 2

Another revision I made complying more to FlackBait's suggestion of getting rid of the orb and making the text below the logo 2D.

Intro 3

More feedback would be greatly appreciated.

edit: I just found that these also look good inverted. What do you think?


Endat