okay this is a business card

i do like colors and make everything complicated lol help me
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any thing to be changed ....


link:

http://www.geocities.com/mdadkd/infomax.jpg


1st of all thanks :p and here ya go the second link ...

am still aint sure about the background so ...

http://www.geocities.com/mdadkd/infomax2.jpg

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I guess it's okey if you are trying to sell stuff for things that lives somewhere in the outer space.

....hihi I knew the scifi fonts would be found somewhere...

It looks like it would be corny in the 80's... and that's pretty corny.

Nos.

sorry man its to "rookie" for me its like you were just playing around and it dosent look very proffesional. I think you can do better.

Scrap the effects and go with readability.

And change the background color. That gray is horrible.



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its grey. . . . theres no set uniform its just 'splat'
and that font is extremly ugly. . . . . .

grey = bad , change
font = ugly , change

Waaaaayyyy too many fonts. 2 fonts, maybe 3 max, but prolly just 2. And only 1 font for the body text. I like the basic concept of the logo, but 'Info' need to be more pronounced--which can either be accomplished with size, color, or use of negative space.

Good start, just a little too ambitious and busy with the fonts.

Why dont you just not post unless its semi-close to the quality that everyone else brings to this forum. The font sucks, the colors suck, the layout sucks. the end.