my first try to these kind in photoshop [take it easy]

hi all.
this is my first post here.

this i tried doing in photoshop and this is my first try to create something like this in photshop. i worked a bit on it and then got kinda stuck in it so just concluded it at the stage where it is right now.

guidance is always appreciated

thanks for your time

hope i'll post in some new soon.

cheers

http://www.angelfire.com/rnb/tushonline/01.jpg

Welcome to the board!
You have some skills bro :P
At least if you just started playing with photoshop.
Only things I have to say :
Okey the "floor" has a filter on it which imo is pretty newbish looking.
Try not to use filters because everyone will see that you haven't really "done" it and it will take down the whole image "quality".
The text is pretty I am 13 years old...I mean "HeLLo My NaMe is 3JoRn" is never fun...if you aren't 13 :P
The first ball could be a bit more sharpen beacuse that's the main thing in this image.
So you should be able to really focus on it.
The composition of the 3 balls is good but I would want to see all 3 balls...
They shouldn't go outside the image imo.

Don't take this wrong...I really like it...But there is Always things you can make better...

*edit, oh yes...in the rules on this forum it says that you shouldn't put the image straight on the forum...instead make a link to it*

hi 3jorn

thanks for welcoming to the board.

yeah, the suggestions are really nice, yeah the first ball should have been more sharp than what it is as uts in the focus... i could have made it more sharp , my mistake...

the text... ummm, actually i just picked the font as is, i mean just because the height of the letters is same, i mean, i would have not picked the that pArTiCuLaR style for any other font as i myself dont like it much as its hardly neat readable....

thanks for the cooments bro... wish i could do some better stuff

and yeah, i will put in the links to the image, hereon.

cheers

i like it, but i think if you made the front marble a like crispier/sharper the overall effect would be better. I like the font you used, you mind telling me the name?

PS:
nice to have you here on the forum, welcome

hi dreamdesign... yeah i'll make that crisper/sharper.. will modify it as get sometime for this, otherwise clients takes all the time, isnt it

yeah, the font name is: 'Sci Fied'.

The front sphere looks like a coin to me. I am not sure, but I guess the top-right highlight is to tight, could be blurred a bit IMO, it's to thin.

Further on it looks pretty cool though.

[QUOTE=Geassel]The front sphere looks like a coin to me.[/QUOTE]

just what i was thinking, may want to add a blurred shine, (crap name but yeh ) lol, get the elipital marquee tool, then do a selection round the marble then take off some , so the selection looks like a hlf moon tilting forward, then right click the area and feather 3 pixels, fill that area white with the fill bucket, then right click the selection again and click 'invert selection, then press delete, add gassian blur if needed , dont have to follow my steps , was jst an idea


welcome aboard
;)

but I guess the top-right highlight is to tight, could be blurred a bit IMO, it's to thin

yeop bro... i had this thought when i saw it first time after concluding it... umm yeop will try this

Further on it looks pretty cool though.

thanks for the appreciation

just what i was thinking, may want to add a blurred shine, (crap name but yeh ) lol, get the elipital marquee tool, then do a selection round the marble then take off some , so the selection looks like a hlf moon tilting forward, then right click the area and feather 3 pixels, fill that area white with the fill bucket, then right click the selection again and click 'invert selection, then press delete, add gassian blur if needed , dont have to follow my steps , was jst an idea

yeop... that look good, but actually the shine should be sharp as its on a glass, like if i got suggestions above in previous replies and even i realised that the front marble has to be more sharper than what it is, and then the shine on the top right should be sharp enough as its a direct light on the object and not seen through refraction or something that kind... so just had a thought of keepin it that sharp....

but thanks for the inputs buddy

cheers