Reminiscence

Hi
This is a design to note book, it's about reminiscence, I don't use any human photo, just places and things photos ,
Please tell me what are your opinions

http://imad120.jeeran.com/remmber.jpg

Hablas español?

(I took a guess from your screen name.)

The road-like thing in the center needs more contrast, because right now all the visual weight is on the heart. You still want that weight on the heart though, because the heart is what is going to guide your eye around the image. So to balance it out, the road needs more contrast. Also more contrast will allow it to match the image in the upper left.

Also where the texture/images meets the leaves, you should add more noise. Use the lasso, feather your selection by about 10 pixels and add a little noise. Right now that area of the picture is just a little blurry.

Telemakhos
what guess from my name ??????

dear Roder454
Thanks so mach

pretty good work man, i like that

Would that be a screen blend of a log, with some flowers in the foreground, a heart shaped text layer and four random photos, along with a few 'soup de jour' touches, such as a faux attempt at micro text.

Nothing totally wrong, just nothing to write home about imo. No offense intended.

I like the overall tone and colour harmony though. In truth, whilst a little cheesey I don't mind the heart shaped text path, although I have not looked at the content of the path for fear of chucking up.

Overall, the piece doesn't flow - nice colours, but it doesn't carry the picture.

I'm not experienced in giving ratings on people their work, but let me say that I like the colours...

Zoro...

Welcome to the forum...

Its good to see someone include "type on path" in their designs.

The image colors are pleasing, but it could use some contrast down south.

Its hard for me to recognize the elements at the bottom immediately.

Or maybe I've just been staring at my monitor too long.... :rolleyes:

There goes my pilots license... :eek:

Regards
Fess