Something im working on!!

This is an Illustration im working on and i just wanted some feedback on the way its coming out

I tried to put some hair so tell me if Im taking the right path on it.

the first
http://www.villagephotos.com/viewpubimage.asp?id_=8398458

the second
http://www.villagephotos.com/viewpubimage.asp?id_=8751214

umm yeah - very nice

did you forget anything?

I hope it'll have hair. That's starting out to be one ugly lady

anyway, I think it's good, but it kind of has a clipart kind of a feel to it. Like it needs more colors. Or more shading.

I'll be interested in seeing it when it's done.

I like it, but would change the facial expression. He (she?) looks like got pinched in the butt . It's not a scary look, more of a surprised look. I would add some details to the upper nose area and force the eye-brows down so that it looks more aggressive.

[QUOTE='[«ghost»]']I like it, but would change the facial expression. He (she?) looks like got pinched in the butt . It's not a scary look, more of a surprised look. I would add some details to the upper nose area and force the eye-brows down so that it looks more aggressive.[/QUOTE]


Thanks thats the kind of feedback I was looking for.

I think those lips look too friendly. Maybe thining them would give them a more mean look. I don't really like the toungue either, maybe just having the whole mouth (except for the teeth of course) black would help.

Look at her/his neck, near his/her chin to the left of the picture. I'd take that little darkened area out.

It's a kind of Annie Lennox in a kid friendly 'Interview with a vampire'.

If you want feedback, it might help to tell us what you want feedback on. What mood or feel were you pitching for etc...