::Green Vision::

My green img.......wall green, that divides the visions that destroy my agitated sleep, where shades takes forms and dances in my desires more insanes, green green.... of illness, of the blown up bile, green yellowish of the wounds.... these are visions of death.

::Green Vision::

um is that a poem ? anyway, very nice now do red vision :D
you have talent keep it up

lol sweet

Not keen on it all, sorry to say. Seems to be an over reliance on schlock photography and or harvested photos. Combined with a few layered textured photos of cracks and scorched earth, tinted green... blahh

I also don't buy into the concept or supposed motivation behind the piece, seems a little hokey to me.

After slagging your submission (not you) off so much, I hope I don't discourage you from submitting more work, as you see, other poeple appreciate more than I what you are trying to achieve.

There's nothing dire, it's just at best formulaic and at worst naieve and uninspired.

@thehermit

I'm not sure if you were typing with a wrong keyboard or its just me not just getting some of the words you're typing.

Thank's for the commentaries, and really img is not good, the effect is simple, but the idea of it I liked, penalty my English to be very bad, but accepted all the critical ones therefore I am always wanting to learn and to improve and is one of the best places for this here....but I go to be always placing mine imgs here.... hahahahaha ;) ;)

well how come that i tend to see the logo that u have used under vision so much in couple games , as in couple webbies ;p

Other than my bad spelling which has no doubt been prolific (have not checked) let me provide a lexicon for you non uk folks ;)

Schlock - bad, overused stock photography or the ilk [Ilk = of it's kind]
Blahh - regurgitate, slightly nauseous, been there done that.
Slagging - not fully appreciating your work as much as you do.
Dire - to be coupled with rrhoea, not good.

There you go sidez a quick translation for you, as I say excuse my spelling ;)

;) Cool, thanks.

Anyways, on the image I don't exactly know where to focus on, cause there's too many objects around. The color scheme seem a little too much, too green(i know its green vision ;))

erm actualy green vision shouldn' t be on that exact color it should be darker in some sides and totaly bright on others none menshoning the scan lines in some machines ;p