Cardiff Rolling Competition

This is a poster i am making for a rollerblading competition.....

just wanted to know what you think really.... i need to put some pictures in but i cant think of how they would look best? any ideas?

Competition Poster

Thanks
Marc

that sure is alot of text for a poster... people usually wont stay and read all that. its a poster not a book =) keep it simple and straight to the point, with only neccessary information/text.

Agree with redeye, no-one will want to read swathes of text. Make it big bold and simple.

thats just a content filler.. there wont be nearly that much text on it....

[QUOTE=lazyroll]thats just a content filler.. there wont be nearly that much text on it....[/QUOTE]

well dont fill it if its not going to be filled, you can judge things without seeing what it really will look like.

ok. thankyou.... but does anyone have a crit? ofthe design?

Well it does not remind me in any way of rollerblading and there is not much design to it.

[QUOTE=lazyroll]ok. thankyou.... but does anyone have a crit? ofthe design?[/QUOTE]


every single element on a page/poster/anything is part of its design, with that in mind you designed a poster block of text in the middle and put some swirls on the corners, for a poster it does not work. You really have to fix that text block if you want us to really critique your work.