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Club Factory Fridays Design

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Feb 18th 2004#142577 Report
Member since: Jun 7th 2003
Posts: 71
Hello to every body, im caming here with another kind of illustration.

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C&C are always welcome.
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Feb 18th 2004#142587 Report
Member since: Nov 10th 2003
Posts: 129
I like it. It flows nicely and has good transitions throughout it's many evident ideas.

In the top left, FACTORY is not very legible and the miniscule text in its underline is not readable at the moment.

Her legs seem a bit messed up, they are both at extremly different angles and do not give a good protrail of a woman. Also maybe give her a bit more padding in the trunk jk

Overall nice, I just tried to point out everything I saw wrong, but I really like it!
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Feb 18th 2004#142589 Report
Member since: Sep 6th 2001
Posts: 3893
I think it looks pretty good, but something about the expresssion on her face makes her look really startled or scared... or something like that.

Other than that though I think it looks good
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Feb 18th 2004#142700 Report
Member since: Jun 7th 2003
Posts: 71
Thanks a lot for comment guys. Im a agree with you say, the next time will be better... im sure.

Regards ;)
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