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Feb 13th 2004#142044 Report
Member since: Dec 11th 2003
Posts: 27
My New Image C&C, please. :p
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Feb 13th 2004#142046 Report
Member since: Oct 16th 2003
Posts: 717
it would be pretty cool if it didn't have that 'graffo art' stuck in the bottom. very nice idea though. i kind of like the way the border just vanishes.
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Feb 13th 2004#142049 Report
Member since: Sep 29th 2003
Posts: 1496
If your going to leave that Graffo Art thing on there, move it to the right so it is not in the way of the earth. I love the idea, looks very good.
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Feb 13th 2004#142071 Report
Member since: Aug 27th 2002
Posts: 672
It looks good... did you paint everything? cause its nice.

It reminds me of ''Le petit prince'' written by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

and I agree with Kranekick, you don't need to put your logo on all your work
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Feb 13th 2004#142074 Report
Member since: Jun 3rd 2003
Posts: 1867
Le petit prince is the exact thing that that reminds me of... it'd be a perfect illustration for that book.

by the way, these guys are right... your logo ruins every bit of work that you do, and your work is nice.... why not just make it text or a much simpler and less intrusive graphic...



but that work is nice. i dont like the fac thtat the end of the grass ends so abruptly when it hits the earth... it kind of looks weird when it butts up against the grass like that. but nice altogether.

my favorite part is the starscape.
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Feb 13th 2004#142079 Report
Member since: Apr 25th 2003
Posts: 1977
Well the concept with the earth/tree/bed is great. I love that. But the execution of the image is poor.

- The background (tutorial?) is too similar. There are way too many larger stars..in almost a pattern like shape. In a real sky....most stars would be small and random. Also the galaxy looking things are terrible....nevermind they're all simliar in size again. Also about the background....if its a pic of space.....how can it fade?? The fade is ok....but isnt realistic(even though its more a fantasy image). Its not like you can turn your head and space would just end.

- Earth has some issues. First.......if we are the sun....so the front side of earth is lit, then the earth would too bright to notice any sort of glow around it. Its like a solar eclipse and its corona ( i believe..). Also if earth is lit that way......then the tree/bed etc needs to be lit that way too (meaning you need more highlights and shadows)

- The last subject im going to comment on is the quality itself. A lot of the image seems to suggest you need to practice selecting. Also you need to pay attention to details.....for example, on the bed your forgot to remove the white from the headboard...and there is a small white triangle in the corner of the footboard and lastly if you look at the bottom of the earth, you'll notice a hard edge line (edge of a photo) that needs to be erased.

Again...its not a bad image. Great concept. Creatively.....your done with this image. Its just technically....you need a lot more work.
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Feb 16th 2004#142382 Report
Member since: Dec 11th 2003
Posts: 27
It is therefore that I taste of this fórum, really agree to the commentaries, did not have the care with the details and mine soon finishes taking off the focus of img, I am remaking this img, Thank`s for you criticize them and the constructive commentaries... and remember beer to it I I pay..... ;)
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