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Feb 9th 2004#141592 Report
Member since: Oct 6th 2002
Posts: 1003
My first image post in a LONG time.

Robots2

C & C por favor.



*edit*

DAMMIT

Still no hotlinking. Cut and paste the link below.

http://pganguly.100megsfree5.com///Robot2.jpg

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Feb 10th 2004#141619 Report
Member since: Apr 25th 2003
Posts: 1977
First link worked for me.

Also nice to see you posting work!

For crits, get rid of the lens flares. They distract when your eye wants to follow the pattern of robots. Also I think the robots would benefit from a little more contrast, cause i think the white light is washing them out a bit. And maybe add a little more bright red "glow" to the eyes.....just to give the robots some life.

Suggestion : I would actually (though its blurred) like to see a little more defenition in the sky. Your eye is lead to the back of the pic (by the line of robots) yet there isnt much to keep interest back there. I think a little detail would bring the compositon home.

Overall though.....I like it. It's evil feeling....great atmosphere!
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Feb 10th 2004#141717 Report
Member since: Oct 6th 2002
Posts: 1003
Thanks, I'll modify accordingly

Also, the links work differently in different browsers, so whichever one works, that's whichever one works.

Anyone else, c & c?

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Feb 10th 2004#141720 Report
Member since: Sep 29th 2003
Posts: 1496
Dang, Rodder beat me to it. The lens flare is very distracting, if you are gonna keep it, tone it down a lot, or just get rid of it. ;) I like the picture a lot though. :D
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