Something I Did!!

hi... i'm new here and wannted to post my last art work and need to here from you what do you think about it

Here

thx

Not bad. Nice color scheme, good attention grabber and it has good visual flow (top left > middle > bottom right....and the arrow/circle brings my eye back up again).

Now for the crits:

- I dont like the background, reason being all the lines/motion blurs kinda break that visual flow. My eye wants to go one direction......but the blurs are pointing you in another if you focus on them instead of the text

- There is too much small text. I aplaud the attempt with that much typography, but a lot of the type is too similar. You need contrast to break the phrases/words apart into important visual elements. Word have diff. meanings.....different weights.....reasons for being in this image...and the image needs to reflect that (for example the way you wrote "creation" )

- Also i would suggest consistency with the blurs. On the text you have motion & gaussian (sp?) blurs. Well you already have motion blurs in the background....so you might benefit from having only gaussian blurs on the text.

You have bad grammar.... but are you learning english? if so then good job...

possiablities is spelled POSSIBILITIES .... and also... making impossibilities into possibilities doesnt really sound very good... maybe try and put :

Changing the impossible into the possible

that would sound better

Well.. now that the grammar lesson is over :D

i like the style ... with the blur and the green and stuff... but what i dont like is that logo in the middle.... i think the rectangle box is a bit over played and is a slight bit jagged

Other than that.... Nice job

Marc

Any one checked the spelling on that ?! *sigh*

Any one checked the spelling on that ?! *sigh*

Obviously you have, since you didnt provide any real help *sigh*. Try commenting on the graphics time.