A Illustratior Pose

Made this all only Illustrator.
Can you please comment, tell me whats missing or what you like and things like that.


http://hem.bredband.net/b132827/pose1.jpg

And remember you can be CRULE to me, just makes the final image look even better... =)


Altso: working on a perfume bottle in a 3d prog, thinking of adding it in. So the name Aroma Deluxe is the name of a madeup perfume.

Cruel is correcting the one word that sticks out the most and is spelled wrong. :D "CRUEL"

It's an interesting composition. The one major thing I would like to see changed is the drop shadow. Either do something a bit more subtle or lose it all together. It looks like a popout you see in those popout books. I would try substituting the black in the gradient mesh with a deep purple or something. With all the colour you are using, the black muddies it up. Dark purples/blues would be much more effective. I am also not a fan of the type, but rarely am I ever. Is it absolutely needed? I don't think so.

All your shapes are nicely done though. Round the elbow off a bit, its a tad sharp. But otherwise, everything is nice and suggestive. Good start.

[QUOTE=Spectra]Cruel is correcting the one word that sticks out the most and is spelled wrong. :D "CRUEL"

It's an interesting composition. The one major thing I would like to see changed is the drop shadow. Either do something a bit more subtle or lose it all together. It looks like a popout you see in those popout books. I would try substituting the black in the gradient mesh with a deep purple or something. With all the colour you are using, the black muddies it up. Dark purples/blues would be much more effective. I am also not a fan of the type, but rarely am I ever. Is it absolutely needed? I don't think so.

All your shapes are nicely done though. Round the elbow off a bit, its a tad sharp. But otherwise, everything is nice and suggestive. Good start. [/QUOTE]


Thanks man, now I know how to type Cruel, will not forget it, me and my english... =)

And man thx for the comments, will wait for some more comments before I start making changes, you were so right about the shadow, Im starting to get blind.

You don´t like the font? I love it so much. =), but will anyway see if another font fits better.

Thx again m8.

Made some changes.

http://hem.bredband.net/b132827/pose2.jpg

I think it's much better and a nice picture... a perfume for the night

Looks really good man. The second one is a lot nicer I think. Everything just looks better then in the first one. Not that the first one was bad, just there was a lot of negative space. Nice work though man. :D

thx for the comments :Spectra, Mihai (hahah that human E.T rocks) and x fusiun x