Motocross Poster

Wow, work from me. I bet most of you thought I didn't design.

Since there is no copyright issues, I thought I'd post the poster I'm working on. This is the pro-bono job I am working on right now.

The type for the poster is unfinished and will be set in Indesign. It's just there for aesthetics right now. I'm debating about placing some text along the bottom. I still have a bit more information to place. This is going to be the general look though. If I were to ever do "grunge" this is how I go about it. Fairly clean.

Any comments and criticism are welcomed.

www.tdee.ca/RacePoster.jpg

it's a motocross bike -

sorry, was you looking for more? hang on...

it's a poster ?

it's a motocross bike -

sorry, was you looking for more? hang on...

it's a poster ?

SHUT UP! ..... im sure that you can learn a thing or million from spectra........

to spectra: good job i really like the i think its the logo in the bottom right corner that makes me want to read the ad though :S ........ also, you said there is grunge.... i cant see any :D

I am of the opinion that I have a lot to learn from anybody and anything what-so-ever !!

so don't take me seriously... I was right though wasn't I?

what that there is a motor bike on a poster?

did you say anything constructive? no.... everyone has to learn to give good comments.... i was the same but i like to think i am a little bit better at making critisms than i used to be....

sorry for loosing my head....

Marc

hey terry that is purty nice.
But I think if you put some text across the bottom it will look like a movie poster.

I like it a lot yay!

I would like to know why you choose the stencil typeface ;) And whats that right text box aligned with, right side of logo? Cants tell its soooo small :(

cheers,
Michael

Good call lazyroll. That post was the biggest brainfart i've ever seen.

which post.... mine? or his? or both.... he he. sorry for stealing your post spectra

i think the stencil is a good idea

Thanks for the comments so far.

Lazyroll - This is as "grungy" as I would ever get :D, thats why I said it. It definitely has no grunge style what so ever.

Mihai - You're right, it would be too much like a movie poster. I feared this as well. Sometimes I have to really watch myself that I don't push an idea overboard. I like the clean space along the bottom, and I shall leave it.

MichaelP - Although a big stretch from the typefaces I normally choose, I needed a bit of flare. I really don't have a good reason for the stencil. It just felt right. And considering it's a pro-bono piece, I will just go with it. :D Also, dont be fooled. This is a small jpeg. The text will all be larger in print. And it is aligned with the right column, above the logo.

Supah - What fun is it just having people that know what they are talking about? :D For every comment this guy makes, you all look that much better.