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Jan 4th 2004#135928 Report
Member since: Dec 28th 2003
Posts: 11
Hello,

I have make a website. But i want some critiques. (I have bad English sorry)

The link : http://membres.lycos.fr/cuxy/cx4.jpg


Thanks
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Jan 4th 2004#135957 Report
Member since: May 12th 2003
Posts: 1088
its ok, looks very tutorial based,
and where the "orb" meets up with the surrounding it dosent blend well, fix that,
you could also throw a logo into the orb unless the orb is your logo?

i also think u should have a pattern insted of just a dark purple, check out
www.squidfingers.com for nice free patterns
overall nothing really to crit on, fill it with content n come bak ;)
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Jan 4th 2004#135960 Report
Member since: Dec 28th 2003
Posts: 11
Ok thanks
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Jan 4th 2004#136001 Report
Member since: Sep 29th 2003
Posts: 1496
Don't worry about your English, it's better then most of the people that are from the US here. :p

On the layout, looks like a good start. You could definatly use a good background, http://k10k.net/ has some very good ones. Keep working on it man.
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Jan 4th 2004#136044 Report
Member since: Jun 3rd 2003
Posts: 1867
Don't worry about your English, it's better then most of the people that are from the US here.


good point lol :D

Agreed, i think it needs more work before getting a critique. Go more in depth. but if you want to use that, i think make the metal look more metallic. the shape of your site is ok. I think it could be more interesting, but like it was said, this needs more time to work out.
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