A splash

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Anyone like this what i think is original design.

its fine - but just a suggestion....
if your aiming for a design company design, its best to stay clear of womanizing themes - unless its specializing in it...

it would make a better wallpaper, more than anything...
just a thought

cheers
heathrowe

Its a modified wallpaper i made. Its not a company design its just a personal design. Thx anyway.

Not liking it so much...

It's just the wrong shade or red... Too much stuff happening and it's not going anywhere...There's no life in it...My eye craves for color...all I see is a martian desert.
There's very little place for content and the chick is very badly cut...you can see the jaggies. Also the title of the site hanging down like that - it's not very good. I have a sore neck and you're forcing me to bend it...
Sorry if I came out as a jerk - didn't want to sound so hard... but I strongly believe you can do more. Take those jaggies for instance - those tell me you've been lazy - it's not something that takes talent - just a little dedication. Do it better - don't rush!


Heatrowe ROFL - "womanizing theme" :D haha - that reminds me of another word - "*****fied"

*edit= aw heck - pus$yfied

ha ha - mihai - if ya hadn't filled in the stars i wouldn't have guessed it....

yip a tad busy for a splash ... and i just think the woman theme is a bit overdone...thats all

cheers
heathrowe

i see a messed up white lineing around her feet. the line is in other places on her body but thats what first got my eye... i guess it's ok just alittle to busy for my taste...

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Remade it a bit and got a little more color to it. Fixed the girls cutting a bit, whats your opinion now?

Is that Jenny McCarthy? I think the lay out is interesting but I would have to see some of the content before I make a decision about the woman. If its a personal site thats fine, but does the content relate to barely dressed woman? If so then, cheers!

Why are you lazy man? You smudged her a bit around the edges, changed the Hue/Saturation of the whole thing and added a jaggy rose...How is that better? While I say "yay" for the bit of color the flower brings - come on - you spent another 5 minutes on it?

The green of the bg brings out all the imperfections of the graphics on it - they also look like you resized them bigger - artefacts and stuff...

i have to agree with all of mihai's comments.
the site looks like it has waaay too much movement. and that italic script font is too difficult to read and it doesn't flow with the techno look of the site in any way. you need to work on your selections too. what's the rose for? you must have a good reason for it.